T1-25 : THRILLER PROJECT 2008/9

Thursday 6 November 2008

T1-25 THRILLER FINAL

final thriller opening feedback

Strengths
variety of camera angels shots and techniques
good camera angels
good use of shots
blurred edges were brilliant
very good us of flashing effect
varieties of images
the hangman was unexpected and looked realistic
the music was really good to because it clashed with the images
loads of great shots and angles and looked really mysterious

improvements
colours of titles
nearly all black and white
use thicker rope couldn't see what was happening properly

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Monday 3 November 2008

TEACHER FEEDBACK

There are a lot of very nice shots in your sequence so far, and the soundtrack certainly sounds appropriate to the context of a thriller, but it's not hanging together as a coherent sequence just yet. Obviously the sound needs finishing. The visuals seem to shift quite abruptly from the shots of the statues and sculptures to the stalker section. Do you have an establishing shot that will enable you to link these two parts together? Also, do you mean for the audience to be able to identify a link between the knife wielding man and the hanging man? At the moment it is very ambiguous. If this was your intention, you need to be able to explain this in terms of what narrative questions and enigmas are being raised by the ambiguity and confusion that exists in the sequence at present.

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T1-25 : THRILLER PROJECT 2008/9